Thursday 31 October 2013

The Halloween House.



Use this picture to create a narrative story.
Remember:
  • Figurative Language
  • Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
  • Structure (O, P, S, R)
  • Precise (interesting) words
  • Speaking parts between characters
  • Character and Setting descriptions!

Start here:
This house is for ghosts, people from the dead, this house is full of evil and horror. The trees are waving side to side as if they were alive. These sky is dark grey. All you can hear inside is hard stomping footsteps.

There are cobwebs lying on the windows with dead spiders.The sacred house is the colour of the sky.The grass is now mouldy and looks like a desert. The stairs going up towards the door are wrecked and are broken they start to creek when you step foot on one, The trees are still waving side to side. If you walk inside the room with the light you will see a girl with a pale face and black eyes standing in the centre of the room with the light on.

The other rooms are all dark and have no sound coming out from them which means the dead are sleeping. These are the sacred nights of the halloween house.  




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